Tuesday, April 8, 2014
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Jawaharlal Nehru once said, "Life is like a game of cards. The hand you are dealt is determinism; the way you play is free will." This declares that life gives you options and the ones you choose are free will. The quote by Nehru is true, because free will revolves around the choices you make when decisions confront you. This can be clearly seen in The Raft by S. A. Bodeen. Robie (the main character in The Raft) is faced with many choices such as; staying at her aunt's house without her supervision, catching a plane by herself after the assault, keeping her deceased flight attendant alive as a figment of her imagination.
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all your sentences are correctly written. all of your sentences follow the structure and how it was supporting your quote. you use your paragraph in one sentence. staying at her aunts house with out her supervision, catching a plane by herself after the assault, keeping her deceased flight attendant alive as a figment of her imagination. to keep it up and work harder.
ReplyDeleteAll sentences are written correctly. All sentences follow the sequence it should. You made the three points your going to talk about, staying at her Aunt's house without supervision, catching a plane by herself after the assault, ans keeping her deceased flight attendant alive as a figment of her imagination. Check whether your supposed to capitalize or not, I think Aunt should not be capitalize because is not given the name of the aunt.
ReplyDeleteYou put the when you were supposed to put they. You should re-read what you write. Other than that its a good paragraph.
ReplyDeleteGabriel your sentences are clear and I like how you used semi colons instead of periods. I like how you didn't use "I".
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